第一段都是清一色的Describe(描繪圖意),一般是3句描寫加1句小結。
我當時的模板是:
(1)兩張圖
○1Upon carefully observation, we will find that the two pictures above are closely related in meaning. ○2In the upper one,_____。○3In the lower one, however,_____。○4The pictures convey a clear and strong message to us that_____。
(2)一張圖
○1There has been a discussion recently about a picture in which _____。○2_____。○3_____。○4The pictures convey a clear and strong message to us that_____。
用以上兩個模板對付所有的Describe要求的首段應該不成問題了。有模板撐著,只要在劃橫線的地方隨便對圖片做一些描寫就OK了。
當然大家也可以找其他的句子。
用曹其軍的話說就是背一些“扔出來能嚇死人的句子”。
第二段的提問方式目前有兩種:Interrept(點明旨意)和example(舉例)。我們分別“對癥下藥”
(1) Interrept(點明旨意)型的:
○1The picture is based on the realities of society. ○2Just like the person in the picture, some people_____. ○3_____。○4_____。○5Such cases can be found in almost all walks of life.
(2) example(舉例):
○1Since many of the philosophic principle we adhere to are adstracted from the daily life, it is easy to find that examples in the world around us. ○2The idea illustrated in this picture is no exception. ○3For example_____。○4_____。○5_____。○6In fact, everyone has surely seen similar evidence of this truth in the their own life.
一般有模板撐著,在空缺的地方補上一兩句簡單的話就可以了。
關鍵是第三段,大多數情況是Comment(評論),一般都是就事論事,很難找到通打一切的模板。
這就顯出了曹其軍的高明之處。
據我們曹爺分析,但凡評論或建議,抽象后就只夠兩個方面了:好的和不好的。
所以只要準備兩個高度抽象的評論段落,就OK了。
好在我們曹爺已經為我們想好了。
請看:
(1)對于不好現象的評論:
Considering the current issue and worsening situation, we should call for some immediate action imposed by the authorities. In other words, our government of various levels must make relevant plans or rules to guarantee a proper order and justice. Beside, the general public should also be made aware that any prompt solution is of benefit to all. Therefore, it’s the duty of ordinary people to actively participate in the action.
(2)對于好現象的評論:
So far it’s not difficult to see that a positive attitude should be maintained here. For one thing, each one of us must be aware of its significance and possible beneficial effects. This way we can translate into proper action in daily life. For the other, some positive action should also be encouraged in the whole society.
把上面兩段狂背下來。
這里要說的是,在第三段的提問中,Suggest(給建議)就等于Comment(評論),Implication(聯系實際),就套第二段的example(舉例)即可。
今天先寫到這里,明天再說小作文模板。
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補充,第二段Interrept(點明旨意)中3、4句的寫法:
這是需要你自己寫的地方。
曹其軍說:Interrept可以有三個方面:1example(舉例)、2effect(說明影響)、3reason(說明原因)。
大家可以任選其中一個來寫,一般是example(舉例)比較好寫,字數也容易上去。
但如果提綱有叫專門example(舉例)段,那么Interrept中就在其他兩個選一,以防內容重疊。