導讀:1.【2015·新課標全國II】書面表達(滿分25分),【考點定位】考查提綱作文,【名師點睛】本作文從實際生活出發,以英語的交際性和實用性為目標,2.【2015·新課標全國I】,【名師點睛】書面表達考查大家所熟悉的提綱類作文,我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.動筆前,本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態,[2014·新課標全國卷Ⅰ],計劃暑假期間去英國學習
1.【2015·新課標全國II】書面表達(滿分25分)
假如你是李華,計劃和同學去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人們國重陽節(the Double Ninth Festival)。請給外教Lucy寫封郵件,邀她一同前往,內容包括:
1. 出發及返回時間;
2. 活動:包餃子、表演節目等。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3. 結語已為你寫好。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【參考答案】
Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊,層次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引導的定語從句和句式spend time doing。此外,還有if從句以及一些短語如invite you to join us,for a visit to,make dumplings等。
【考點定位】考查提綱作文。
【名師點睛】本作文從實際生活出發,以英語的交際性和實用性為目標,兼顧尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意義。體現了課程標準要求的以知識運用為教學目標的要求。在高三備考時,應該多從把語言作為交流的
工具的角度去準備書面表達。
2.【2015·新課標全國I】
書面表達(滿分25分)
假定你是李華,你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國節日風俗和中學生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿,要點如下:
欄目介紹;
稿件內容;
稿件長度:約400詞;
交稿日期:6月28日前。
注意:
詞數100左右;
可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫的;
開頭語已為你寫好。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
試題分析:本篇書面表達屬于英文書信,根據提示信息要求寫一封給美國朋友彼得寫信的約稿,為學校校英文報“外國文化”欄目刊登介紹美國節日風俗和中學生生活的文章。寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確三個要點:首先,簡單介紹校英文報欄目的情況。2、建議Peter介紹美國節日風俗和中學生生活。3、稿件的要求及時間。寫作時根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態。就本文而言應該用一般現在時態。 4、注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.運用了過去分詞作后置定語, And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.運用了賓語從句。此外,文章還使用了大量習語和短語,如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等。
【考點定位】考查提綱作文。
【名師點睛】書面表達考查大家所熟悉的提綱類作文,我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前,一定要認真分析要點,理解要點要表達的含義,不能遺漏要點,跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態,上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和過渡詞語,不僅增強了表達效果,而且實現了形式與內容的統一。
[2014·新課標全國卷Ⅰ]
假定你是李華,計劃暑假期間去英國學習英語,為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意,請給該校寫封信,詢問有關情況(箭頭所指內容)。
注意:1.詞數100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:住宿 accommodation
【思路點撥】 本文是一篇書信應用文。文章內容是李華計劃暑假期間去英國學習英語,看到廣告后感覺廣告里有一些問題沒說清楚,想要給校方寫信咨詢有關事項??忌⒁庑诺母袷?,還要注意時態的選擇,即以一般現在時為主,兼有將來時,人稱用第一人稱。注意恰當地使用一些連詞,使文章自然、流暢,還可以使用一些高級句型和詞匯來提高作文檔次。
【參考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad,and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
[2014·新課標全國卷Ⅱ] 一家英語報社向中學生征文,主題是“十年后的我”。請根據下列要點和你的暢想完成短文。
1. 家庭;
2. 工作;
3. 業余生活。
注意:1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3. 開頭語已為你寫好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
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【思路點撥】 本文的話題是“十年后的我”,要求考生從家庭、工作和業余生活三方面來暢想十年以后的自己。文章應該使用將來時和第一人稱。
參考要點:1.十年以后的生活和現在完全不同,會成為一個成年人,有了自己的家庭,甚至有了可愛的孩子。2.希望自己能夠在自己喜歡的計算機行業工作,做一名程序設計師。工作順利,和同事相處融洽。3.在業余生活中經常參加鍛煉,如游泳、登山等。假期里出去旅游,生活多姿多彩。
本文要求考生充分發揮自己的想象力,靈活運用英語知識,采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來,
注意主次分明,詳略得當,語言力求準確、簡潔??忌鶕榫暗陌l展,按順序安排好材料,同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性??忌仨氄J真檢查是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【參考范文】
I_often_imagine_what_my_life_will_be_like_in_the_future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer. I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I'll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I'll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I'll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colourful.
【2013?課標全國卷Ⅰ】書面表達(滿分25分)
假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信,告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會,帶去他想要的那幅中國畫,同時詢問他是否可以接機。信中還需說明:
李明:高個子,戴眼鏡
航班號:CA985
到達:8月6日上午11:30
注意:1. 詞數100左右
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3. 開頭語和介紹語已為你寫好。
Dear Peter, How are you doing?___________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Peter, How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【2013·全國大綱卷、新課標II】書面表達(滿分25分)
假定你是李華,自制一些中國結(Chinese knot)。給開網店的美國朋友Tom寫封信,請他代賣,要點包括:
1.外觀(尺寸、顏色、材料)
2.象征意義
3.價格
注意:1.詞數100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3.開頭語已為你寫好。
【參考范文】
Dear tom,
How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!
Li hua.
2012年高考英語作文真題:全國卷2(含范文)
第三節 書面表達(滿分30分) 假設你是李華。你班同學決定為小名舉辦生日聚會。請你寫信邀請外教Susan參加,要點包括:
1、時間:周五晚8點至9點2、地點:學生俱樂部3、內容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等
4、要求:備小禮物
注意:
1、詞數100左右,開頭語已為你寫好;
2、可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3、答案必須寫在答題卡相應的位置上。
One possible version
Hi Susan, We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday. We'd like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And it's going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we'll light the candles and sing 'Happy Birthday' togather for him. Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games. It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party,too.
Yours,
Li Hua
2012年高考英語作文真題:全國卷1
第二節 書面表達(滿分25分)(注意:在試題卷上作答無效)
假定你是李華,從互聯網((the Internet)上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡(Singapore) 舉辦夏令營,歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。 內容主要包括:
1.自我介紹(包括英語能力);
2.參加意圖(介紹中國、了解其他國家);
3.希望獲準。
注意:
1.數100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3.郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好.
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