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上一期，小編分享了“觀點對照型”和“原因分析型”寫作的模板。這一期，我們來學習下圖畫作文和圖標作文的寫作模式。
圖畫作文寫作思路是固定的：描述圖片、闡明觀點、給出建議。
第一段，重點描述圖畫內容。對圖畫內容的描述可以用圖畫中人物的對話。簡要描述即可，不用發散或挖掘。也就意味著，事實上你若看不懂圖畫中的某些文字，其實沒關系，照抄就好。
第二段，闡明觀點。觀點在題干中往往會給得很清楚，這就說明仔細審清題干比看懂圖畫中的對話更重要。闡明觀點之后的思路與一般的四六級提綱型寫作一致：可以先舉例說明現象、然后再探討導致現象的原因以及該現象可能導致的影響等。
末段，除了總結觀點外，一般還可以提出建議。這段的寫法無論是圖畫、圖表還是提綱寫作，都差別不大。
圖畫作文模板：
It seems to me that thecartoon / drawing is sending a message about ____________（圖畫內容），whichreveals ____________（稍作評價）.In myperspective of view, ____________ （表明個人觀點）。 Apparently, ____________（將個人觀點和圖片內容相結合，得出觀點。）For one thing, ____________（從社會角度論證）. Foranother thing, ____________（從個人角度說明）. For example, ____________（自己、朋友或他人，只要自己知道或聽過的例子）.Last but not least, ____________（從反面角度談論）. As aresult, the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _____________（建議或措施）.Onlyin this way can we ____________（展望結果）. In conclusion / To my understanding,____________（再次表明觀點或態度）. We should ____________（進一步說明個人的觀點）.
范文：以2013年6月 英語四級作文為例
Which Is More Important
As can be seen from the picture above,there is a conversation between a son and a father. The father told his sonthat it is more important to empty the dustbin than to worry about disposing of nuclear waste, that is to say, small things go first when dealing with bigthings. I’m definitely on the father’s side in this and I’m sure I’m notalone.
A case in point is the successful launch of ShenZhou 10 spacecraft, which excites everyone and makes every feel proud ofChina. Behind this great event there are a host of detailed things, called petty things, conducted by millions of scientists, who have devoted themselvesto the mission. It is the petty things that contribute to the success, which reminds us of the significance of small things. We also take ourselves for example. It is acknowledged that before running we must learn to stand and walk building up a solid foundation for running. Although walking is considered as a trifle while running is treated as a great thing, walking is the first step.
As an old saying goes, one can’t make a bigsuccess without bing self reliant. So we should keep it in our mind that before accomplishing important tasks, perform small tasks. Only in this way can we make the highest eminence.
As what is vividly shown in the picture,many college students have the same doubt as the one in the picture that is whether that stuff will be outdated when they graduated and began to work. That stuff, as we can see from the picture, refers to the basic learning skills such as mathematics we learned when we were in primary school. It also reveals a phenomenon in the college that there are a great number of students, who question the practicability of their subjects because they are too simple to behelpful with their occupation afterwards.
Does that mean these subjects are useless? Definitely not. These subjects are like the foundation of a building. Thoughthey are commonplace even invisible, they are of vital importance. Mastering these basic skills we can grasp the fundamental elements of learning ability.As an old saying goes like this, high buildings rise from the ground. Only if we lay a solid foundation, we can’t set up a high building.
In another word, do you think it is feasible to let a person learn English without learning a, b, c? Or with whatwas said above, we can draw a conclusion that the basic learning skills are quite essential to both our whole study and the work we will take after graduation. Thus we should pay more attention to the basic subjects and master the ability required at the further career.
The Importance of Reading Literature
Literature is acknowledged as the most precious product of human civilization and wisdom, especially by our teachers.So they always ask their students to read as many as literary works. Just as the drawing shown above, a teacher gives a literary work to her student,saying: “Just think of it as if you’re reading a long text-message.”
It is of great significance for us toappreciate literature due to the following reasons. Firstly, a good literature can get you to know a life experience through the eyes of someone other than yourself. The more experience you gain, the more knowledgeable you are.Secondly, a good literature allows you to learn about history in a personalized way. The stories told in the works can act as mirrors and help you adjust your own behaviors. Lastly, a good literature is an effective way for relaxation.The beautiful and moving scenes shown in the literature are helpful for one’smental health.
In short, literature is indispensable in our life. We, students, should catch our time to read more literatures.
圖表作文的定義:
圖標闡釋類作文就是要求考生描述圖表或圖畫中的數據或畫面，解釋這些數據或畫面所反映出的變化、現象或者問題，并對其產生的原因、影響或存在的問題進行分析說明。
圖表作文的寫作思路：
第一段概述圖表。用描述性的語言寫出圖標內容，主要應該是描寫趨勢，描寫這種發展變化，而不是簡單的引用數據。先寫主題句：As is shown in the 圖表， I see/find....或As can be seen from 圖表，...或As has been proved form 圖表，...
第二段分析原因。要先寫出主題句，引出下文對原因的說明：The following reasons can account for 現象。那么后面的擴展句就開始陳述數據變化的原因，但要記住的是這個原因不能只寫一點，這樣就沒有說服力，至少要寫出來兩點。
第三段對這個數據變化產生的影響和結果進行說明。一樣先寫主題句，總結作者自身的思考或看法：From my point of view/As for me，...然后在接下來的擴展句當中就你的思考看法進行展開。這里要注意的是對結果方向的把握：⑴如結果是好的：預測未來，展望未來。⑵如結果是壞的：建議措施，解決方案。⑶如結果是中立的：僅發表個人觀點或個人見解。最后寫出結尾句。
圖表作文模板：
According to the chart / graph， the changesin the number of____________（圖表整體趨勢）. There was an increase in ____________（圖表細節）. At the point of ____________, ____________reaches its peak value of ____________(數據或變化). Whathas caused these changes? There are mainly three reasons. Firstly, ____________（原因一）.Secondly, ____________（原因二）. The number of____________ increased over the period. ____________ rose by _________ from________ to ________________. And there were____________. Finally, ____________（最后一個原因）. In conclusion / We can safely draw the conclusion that ____________（結論）. Therefore, ____________（進一步談論更多個人想法）.
范文：電影讓位給電視（圖表分析）
Film is giving way to TV
The latest statistics show that the numberof people attending cinemas is getting steadily smaller. At the same time, thenumber of television viewers is growing at almost the same rate. Experts say that these two trends are connected in three ways. First, over the past few decades television sets have appeared in almost every home. Second, films very quickly become available on video, and can be shown on the TV screen. Third, it is becoming more expensive to make films, and so the prices of cinema seats are rising.
However, this does not mean the death ofthe movie industry. There will always be people who prefer to go out to see afilm. This is because no matter how good a TV film or video is, it can never beas entertaining as a film shown on the “big screen.”
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Film is giving way to TV. According to an investigation made on the number of film-goers and TV-watchers in a ten-year period (1975-1985), at the end of 1985, the number of film-goers declined sharply to about 15 thousand which accounts for only some 20 percent of what in1975, the hey day of films. This decline, no doubt, owes to the steadily increasing number of TV-watchers in the same decade.
This, I think, indicates the changing pace in our society. Nowadays, people prefer TV to film largely because they have less chance than their older generation to spend two or three hours in a cinema; they prefer a kind of entertainment which is freer, less time-consuming and thus more efficient. TV just meets their need. This is at least partly if not wholly the reason that attributes to the boom of TV in our generation.
Nevertheless, there are still a number of film-fans nowadays. They claim that as a classical art, film is far more enjoyable than TV. Some of them also want to recall the “true-life” which existed in the “good-past”. All in all, film is still a charming kind of art asit used to be.
On over-fishing
As is shown in the graph/chart/picture/cartoon, we can see clearly that with the rampancy of commercial fishing, the number of fishes sharply /dramatically /considerably decreased.In one picture,there werevarious kinds of fish and only one fishing boat in 1900,On the contrary,in 1995 there was only one fish,but many fishing-boats. The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another.(這些數據似乎是孤立存在的，但是卻密切相關．)
The purpose of this picture is to show us that much more/due attention has to bepaid to the decrease/decline/reduction/of ocean resources. Owing to/ as theconsequence of/as the result of(由于) over-fishing, the number of fishes has obviously decreased. If we let this situation go as it is, we won’t know where fish will be in the future.By that time, our environment will have suffered a great destruction.
Therefore,it is imperative(迫切的)for us to take drastic measures to reverse the disturbing(adj.令人不安的) trend illustrated in the charts. For one thing/on the one hand, we should appeal to our authorities to work out strict laws to control commercial fishing. For another/on the other hand, we should cultivate/enhance the awareness of people that the ocean/forest resources are very vital to us. Only in this way can we protect our natural environment/ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty and we will have a brilliant future.
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