第1篇（2017四川內江30分）
投稿——幫助他人
某英語報社開辟專欄“Helping others”, 向中學生征稿。假設你叫李華, 請根據以下要點提示，用英語寫一篇征文，向該報社投稿。
上周你的同學魏華發高燒住院；
在他生病期間，你為他所做的兩件事情；
你的感受和認識。
要求：
所寫內容必須包括以上要點；
文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
內容連貫，并進行合理拓展；
100詞左右；題目已經寫好，不計入總詞數。
Helping others
【高分范文】
Helping others
My classmate Wei Hua got a high fever last week. He had to be in hospital.
Yesterday was Saturday. My classmates and I went to see him together. We met at the school gate at 9 :00 in the morning. Then we went to the hospital by bus. I thought we should get him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy. What’s more, Wei Hua wasworried about his study. So I brought him my notebooks and tried my best to answer his questions. I hope Wei Hua can be better soon.
If you light a lamp for somebody, it will also brighten your path. So, take action to help others, because it will not only make you happy but also bring you others’help.
第2篇（2017浙江麗水20分）
為母校做一些有意義的事
假設你是Li Ming, 你的筆友Lisa想了解在畢業之際，你將為母校做些什么有意義的事。從下表所列的五項內容中，至少選擇兩項，用英語給Lisa寫一封電子郵件。
注意：
（1）文中必須包括所選內容括號內的提示，并適當發揮；
（2）文中不得出現真實人名和校名等相關信息；
（3）詞數：80～100；
（4）短文開頭供選擇使用，不計入總詞數。
Hello Lisa,
How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school.
Li Ming
高分范文
Hello Lisa,
How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school. Here are my plans that I would like to share with you. First of all, I will volunteer to do some cleaning with my classmates, such as cleaning the windows and sweeping the floors. To keep our school clean, we will ask our schoolmates not to litter at school. Also, I will give away my favorite books to the school library so that our younger schoolmates can read more good books. And I will call on more schoolmates to do so. It’s really hard for me to say goodbye. I wish my school to have a better future.
Li Ming
第3篇（2017四川涼山州15分）
高分范文
【熱點解讀】《朗讀者》是一檔由中央電視臺推出，董卿擔任制作人的大型朗讀類真人秀節目。節目以個人成長、情感體驗、背景故事與傳世佳作相結合的方式，選用精美的文字，用最平實的情感讀出文字背后的價值，節目旨在實現文化感染人、鼓舞人、教育人的傳導作用，展現有血有肉的真實人物情感。因此同學們在課外學習中應多關注此類節目，把其和學習結合起來。
【寫作點撥】本文就“閱讀”這一話題展開討論，根據提示可知，寫作內容明確，包括：1. 讀書好（閱讀的好處）；2. 讀好書（讀什么樣的書）；3. 好讀書（怎樣讀書）。注意：寫作時應包括以上所有要點。文章時態為一般現在時，人稱以第一人稱為主。
【高分范文】
第4篇（2017山東德州20分）
高分范文
【寫作點撥】對于“中國傳統文化”的考查倍受中考青睞，考生在平時的學習中應多積累此類素材。本文要求根據提示內容介紹中國的三個傳統節日，即考生在構思時每段內容可圍繞一個節日展開。元宵節和中秋節已給出詳細提示，含節日名稱、時間、美食、活動方式及意義，考生直接把內容組織起來即可。在介紹第三個節日時，盡量選擇自己熟悉的，且也要能從以上角度發揮。
【高分范文】
第5篇（2017山東濱州25分）
高分范文
【寫作點撥】文章需根據圖表提示，介紹幾種職業是怎樣為社會做貢獻的，且要說明學生應該怎么辦。圖表已給出了各職業名稱和對應的關鍵詞，給考生很大的提示作用。考生在構思時，第一段可總說中國人都在努力為建設美麗中國做貢獻；第二段分別描述每種職業所做出的具體貢獻；第三段闡述作為學生應該怎么做。
【高分范文】
第6篇（2017四川綿陽20分）
高分范文
【寫作點撥】根據題干內容可知，本文是圍繞“愛好”展開的，結構簡潔明確。首先介紹愛好是什么，然后陳述理由，注意至少為3條。考生只要保證內容連貫，語法正確，且給出的理由充分即可。
【高分范文】
第7篇（2017重慶A卷18分）
照片背后的故事
在過去的日子里，我們曾經歡笑，也曾經哭泣……照片，或將這些精彩定格，或勾起你對往事的回憶。某英語網站向你發出邀請。請你按要求用英語寫一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事。
要求：
故事必須原創；
80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。
參考要點：
描述你的照片（時間，地點，人物……）；
分享你的故事（起因，經過，結果……）；
談談你的感受（感動，懷念，影響……）。
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,
高分范文
【寫作點撥】本文要求圍繞“照片”敘述一個與之相關的故事，是一篇記敘文。根據參考要點可知，文章屬于經典“三段式”的寫作：1. 描述照片拍攝的時間、地點和人物等基本信息；2. 敘述與照片相關的故事，包括起因、經過和結果等；3. 談論對事情的感受。寫作過程中，要注意時態的變化：描述過去發生的事情主要用一般過去時，談論對事情的感受主要用一般現在時。
【高分范文】
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily.
I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”
Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!
第8篇（2017重慶B卷18分）
征文——我和朋友之間的故事
在我們成長的道路上，朋友是不可或缺的風景。在相知相伴的歲月里，留下了多少美好的故事和難忘的回憶！某英語報社以“A Story Between My Friend And Me”為題開展征文活動，請你按要求用英語寫一篇文章參賽。
要求：
故事必須原創；
80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。
參考要點：
分享故事（起因，經過，結果……）；
表達感受（幸福，感動，思考……）；
. ……
A Story Between My Friend And Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.
高分范文
【寫作點撥】本文是一篇命題作文，并給出了參考要點。由題目“A Story Between My Friend and Me”可知寫作的重點在于敘述故事，并表達感受。寫作時，可選取個人與朋友之間印象深刻，且比較有教育意義的事件。敘述個人故事，要用第一人稱，且時態主要為一般過去時，表達感受時，用一般現在時。
【高分范文】
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.
Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.
In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.
第9篇（2017浙江舟山20分）
選書的理由
學校將舉辦“A Summer for Better English”活動，請你從下面的推薦書單中選擇兩本想閱讀的書刊，然后用英語寫一篇短文，在學校的English Corner分享。
A list of books for English skills and for fun
□ Basic English Writing □ Treasure Island
□ Secrets of English Words □ Robinson Crusoe
□ A Guide to English Listening □ Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland
□ 20 Topics for English Speaking □ Time for Kids（a magazine）
注意：
（1）必須從書單中選擇2本書刊，并闡述理由。
（2）文中不得出現與你身份相關的信息。
（3）詞數：80～100。短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數。
短文首句：To improve our English, the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer.
高分范文
【寫作點撥】本文要求寫一篇表達觀點的短文。考生在寫作時，一定要注意題目中要求選擇兩本想閱讀的書刊，因此在陳述理由的時候，要分別針對選擇的兩本書刊說明理由。題目中給出的書刊列表“暗藏玄機”。左列書刊提高英語語言能力，右列書刊拓展英語文化。考生可針對兩列書刊不同的功能從中選擇兩本，并簡要陳述理由。
【高分范文】
To improve our English,the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer. Of all the suggested books,I have decided to choose Secrets of English Words and Time for Kids.
The first one is a book which may help learn English words better. By reading this book, I will surely know more new words. This will make my future study much easier. Time for Kids is a popular magazine specially written for students, in which I will read interesting stories and have a taste of teen life abroad. So it must be great fun reading it.
By being part of this activity, I am expecting a big step forward in my English.
第10篇（2017山東泰安20分）
共享單車之我見
如今，很多城市出現了一種綠色出行方式—共享單車（bike-sharing）。它因環保、便捷而備受青睞，但同時也引發了一系列問題。請你根據提示以“Bike-sharing”為題寫一篇英語短文，表達自己的看法和建議。
要點提示：
Advantages
be convenient，less pollution，reduce the traffic pressure（減緩交通壓力）
take exercise…
Problems
throw away, damage(損毀)，be stolen…
Advice
civilized(文明的)，follow the rules，take good care of…
注意：
短文應包括以上要點，可適當發揮，以使行文連貫；
文中不得出現真實的人名、校名及地名；
詞數：80～100字（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.
高分范文
【熱點解讀】共享單車是一種自行車共享服務。自2017年，共享單車在各大城市如雨后春筍般茁壯成長，為人們的出行帶來了極大的便捷，有效地緩解了交通擁堵，也為低碳環保出了一份力。同時，共享單車也出現了一系列的問題，如亂停亂放，被偷被毀，充值容易退費難等。針對這些問題，各地也推出了一系列的舉措來規范共享單車的管理。
共享單車是2017年中考命題人的“寵兒”，以不同的形式頻頻出現在各地中考試卷中。考生在繁忙的復習備考中，要注重關注社會熱點，思考社會問題，尤其是與生活息息相關的熱點。
【寫作點撥】本文要求以“Bike-sharing”為題，根據表格的內容提示，寫一篇短文，表達自己對共享單車的看法和建議。寫作時，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個要點：首先，闡述共享單車的優點；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問題；最后，根據問題給出個人建議。
【高分范文】
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It’s known that it has many advantages. So it’s enjoyed by lots of people.
First of all, it’s very convenient for people to go somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise. In this way, it’s helpful to people’s health.
However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them , and some bikes are stolen.
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better, and our environment will be more beautiful.
第11篇（2017達州10分）
如何做一個好學生
某班英語課上，就“爭當中華好少年”進行小組交流活動，請你根據活動記錄情況，以“How to be a great student?”為題，寫一篇英語短文。
良好習慣
生活規律，健康飲食，加強鍛煉
學習刻苦，上課認真聽講，按時完成作業
誠實守信
不撒謊，考試不作弊
遵守校規
嚴禁私自下河洗澡，嚴禁手機進校園，不打架斗毆
……
……
要求：
全文字數90詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入單詞總數。
條理清楚，書寫工整，句式規范。標點符號和大小寫使用正確。
內容必須包含表格中的提示信息，并適當發揮；文中不得出現真實的人名及地名。
How to be a great student?
It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, how to be a good student?In my opinion,
高分范文
【寫作點撥】根據給出的題目“How to be a great student?”可以判斷題目要求考生寫一篇做法建議類的短文。表格中已經給出了具體的做法，考生在寫作時需要圍繞表格中給出的三個方面寫作，并適當發揮。如：注重個人公眾場合的行為舉止、與同學互幫互助等。做法建議類文章在寫作時，主要用一般現在時。
【高分范文】
It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, how to be a good student?
In my opinion，there are lots of things we should do. Firstly, it’s necessary to develop good habits in life and study. For example, we should eat healthily and do much exercise every day. Besides, we should listen to the teacher carefully and finish homework on time. Secondly, be honest. Don’t tell lies and never cheat in tests. Honesty is the best policy. Thirdly, we are supposed to obey the school rules. Don’t go swimming alone without permission, and don’t take mobile phones to school and so on. Finally, we should get on well with our classmates. When someone is in trouble, we should give them a hand.
第12篇 （2017宜賓15分）
如何提高學習效率
目前很多學生整天都忙于學習，成績卻不理想。請根據表格內容，結合自身實際，寫一篇關于“怎樣提高學習效率”的短文。
要求：
短文應條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明，90詞左右。（開頭結尾已給出，不計入 總字數）
短文中不能出現真實的人名、校名及地名等信息。
短文應包括全部信息，可圍繞主題適當發揮。
學習方法
1. listen to the teacher
2. take notes
3. review in time
4. correct mistakes
…
體育鍛煉
1. exercise
…
其他方面
1. make good use of time
2. ask sb. for help
…
How to improve our study effectively
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
高分范文
【寫作點撥】根據題目要求可以看出本文是一篇做法建議類的說明文。考生需要結合表格中給出的中英文提示，圍繞“如何提高學習效率”寫出具體的做法或建議。寫作時，要注意使用連接詞將各個要點銜接起來，使文章的表達更流暢自然。除了表格中給出的要點，考生還要適當發揮。
【高分范文】
How to improve our study effectively
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions.
You need to find an effective learning method. Take advantage of class time to listen to the teacher. Taking notes will help you remember what the teachers say. After class, you should review your lessons in time. You should also finish your homework carefully. If you have discovered any mistakes, correct them immediately. This will help you form a good learning habit.
Besides, you need to do some exercise. It can not only make you relaxed but also build up your body.
All in all, you should make good use of time in studying and relaxation. If you have any problems in your study, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help.
If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
第13篇（2017金華20分）
分享名著——《老人與海》
假如你應邀參加一個國際讀書會，并將分享自己讀過的一本好書。請根據下列表格中的要點，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你要分享的書。
Key points（要點）
Words and expressions for reference（參考詞匯）
What the name is
The Old Man and the Sea
…
Who write it
Ernest Hemingway，America
…
What it is about
fisherman，
fight against fish and nature
…
Why I like it
meaningful，never give up，
well-known sentence: “Man is not
made for defeat（擊敗）.”, …
interesting, helpful…
well-known sentence：…
注意：
（1）可選擇使用所給的書名及內容，也可另選書籍；
（2）短文內容可適當增加；
（3）文中不得出現真實的人名和校名；
（4）詞數：80~100；
（5）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數。
短文首句：The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea.
高分范文
【寫作點撥】根據題目要求可知本文是一篇說明文，考生需要用英語介紹《老人與海》這本國外名著。寫作要點在表格中已經給出。寫作時，首先要介紹這本書的基本信息，如作者的名字和國籍；其次，介紹這本書的大概內容；最后，介紹為什么喜歡這本書。文章的段落依然呈現“三段式”的結構，層次分明。
【高分范文】
The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea,but finds it hard to take it home.On the way back,he has to fight against the fish,and the sea as well.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting withdifficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book: Man is not made for defeat. This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.(100 words)
第14篇（2017安徽25分）
邀請——參加展演活動
假如你是李華，你們學校將舉行“弘揚中華傳統文化—戲曲進校園”展演活動，你打算邀請你的美國朋友Mike參加。請你根據以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。
時間：7月1日下午2點；
地點：學校操場；
內容：文化展覽、節目表演等。
提示詞：戲曲opera n. 表演 performance n.
注意：
詞數80~100；
可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
信中不能出現與本人相關的信息。
開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
高分范文
【寫作點撥】本文要求考生寫一封邀請信，邀請美國朋友Mike來參加展演活動。信的開頭和結尾已經給出，考生在寫作時重點關注如何寫好內容。根據給出的要點，短文中要包含活動的時間、地點和活動內容。寫作時，考生需要運用適當的連接詞將各個要點緊密地連接起來，并根據想象對活動內容做簡要的說明和評價。
【高分范文】
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.
Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performance will be put on. It’s a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. Come and join us! I think we’ll have a great time.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
