1 主題一 社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀 【示例分析】 如何理解“成功”, 不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(yǔ)(quotation), 按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. ” —Sir Winston Churchill 內(nèi)容要求:1. 你對(duì)該引語(yǔ)的理解;2. 你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷;3. 恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意:1. 短文開(kāi)頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息;3. 詞數(shù):80左右。 練考場(chǎng)審題 Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題 謀篇布局
Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴 字字珠玉 (1)美詞:get discouraged, enthusiasm, consist in, worse still, be about to do. . . when. . . , succeed in (2)佳句:① So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.② Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Step 3:斟酌詞句 妙筆生花 要點(diǎn)1:我非常激動(dòng), 決定試騎一下。 一般表達(dá):I was excited and tried my hand at riding it.句式升級(jí):(so. . . that. . . 倒裝句)我是如此激動(dòng)以至于等不及要試騎一把了。So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. 要點(diǎn)2:回顧過(guò)去, 我覺(jué)得如果我失去了信心, 就不能學(xué)會(huì)騎自行車。 一般表達(dá):Looking back, I feel if I lost heart, I couldn’t learn to ride a bike.句式升級(jí)(分詞作狀語(yǔ), 虛擬語(yǔ)氣):回顧過(guò)去, 我覺(jué)得如果我失去了信心, 就不能學(xué)會(huì)騎自行車。Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Step 4:銜接過(guò)渡 斐然成篇 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failures. Instead, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we can’t succeed in everything we try. What’s important is that we should stick at it. 【仿寫(xiě)實(shí)踐】 假定你是李華, 現(xiàn)在某英文報(bào)社面向中學(xué)生征文, 題為“50年后的地球”, 請(qǐng)發(fā)揮你的想象力, 用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文, 向該報(bào)社投稿。注意:詞數(shù)80左右。_____________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】What will our earth be like after 50 years? I have some wonderful predictions.The environment then will be much better than it is now. People can enjoy the blue sky, white clouds and fresh air.There will be less pollution. Trees and flowers can be seen here and there.The rivers will be cleaner as no factories pour waste into the rivers and lakes. As for people’s life, there will be great changes. First, people will lead a more comfortable life because robots will reach each family and help people do the housework. In addition, people can work at their own homes on the Internet. In this way, they will have more time to entertain themselves. The earth will become a more comfortable planet for people to live on 50 years later. 2 主題二 傳統(tǒng)文化 【示例分析】 假如你是李華, 前天你收到英國(guó)筆友Kathy發(fā)來(lái)的電子郵件, 說(shuō)她很想報(bào)名參加即將在當(dāng)?shù)嘏e辦的“漢語(yǔ)民歌演唱比賽(Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest)”活動(dòng), 但信心不足。請(qǐng)你給她回復(fù)一封郵件, 內(nèi)容包括:1. 鼓勵(lì)她積極報(bào)名參加;2. 幫助分析參加的意義;3. 給她提幾點(diǎn)建議。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。 Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題 謀篇布局
Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴 字字珠玉 (1)美詞:to be held, talent for, sign up for, participate in, a much better understanding of (2)佳句①It is a good chance to show your talent for music, so I encourage you to sign up for it.②What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest. Step 3:斟酌詞句 妙筆生花 要點(diǎn)1:事實(shí)上, 你不必?fù)?dān)心輸贏。Actually, you needn’t worry about whether you will win or lose. 句式升級(jí)(特殊句式)Actually, there is no need to worry about whether you will win or lose. 要點(diǎn)2:最重要的是, 通過(guò)參加比賽, 你能提高你的漢語(yǔ)(水平)。Most importantly, you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest. 句式升級(jí)(主語(yǔ)從句, 表語(yǔ)從句)What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest. Step 4:銜接過(guò)渡 斐然成篇 Dear Kathy,I am glad to know that you are interested in the Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest to be held in your hometown. It is a good chance to show your talent for music, so I encourage you to sign up for it.Actually, there is no need to worry about whether you will win or lose. What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest. What’s more, in the activity you can make more friends who are interested in learning Chinese. If you want to do a great job, you should do more practice before the contest. Of course, it is a good idea to listen to some Chinese music programs before the contest so that you can get a much better understanding of Chinese folk music.I am sure you can do a good job! Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【仿寫(xiě)實(shí)踐】假定你是李華, 你的英國(guó)筆友丹尼斯對(duì)中國(guó)功夫很感興趣, 來(lái)信詢問(wèn)中國(guó)功夫的相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中所給提示信息, 用英文給他回一封信。
功夫
俗稱中國(guó)武術(shù)(martial arts), 中國(guó)國(guó)寶
起源
可追溯到古代自衛(wèi)……
人群
老少皆宜, 傳統(tǒng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的一種
風(fēng)格
有上百種, 一些模仿動(dòng)物, 還有一些受到中國(guó)文化的啟發(fā)
注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 Dear Dennis,I’m glad you’re interested in traditional Chinese Kung Fu. Here is some information about it.Kung Fu is commonly known as Chinese martial arts. The origin of Chinese martial arts dates back to the needs of self-defense, hunting activities and the military training in ancient China. It is one of China’s traditional sports, and is being practiced by the young as well as the old, gradually making it a special element of Chinese culture. As a national treasure, Kung Fu has hundreds of different styles. Some styles are modeled after the movements of animals, while others are inspired by Chinese culture.If you want to learn more information, please pay a visit to China. I’m sure you are bound to have a good taste of Chinese Kung Fu.Yours,Li Hua 3 主題三 依法治國(guó) 【示例分析】 假設(shè)你班最近就圓明園是否重建開(kāi)展了一場(chǎng)討論, 同學(xué)們觀點(diǎn)有分歧, 各自理由主要如下表所示, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提供的討論情況寫(xiě)一篇英文報(bào)道。
贊同
反對(duì)
1. 重建該園輝煌景象
1. 保留原樣更為合理
2. 中華文明具體體現(xiàn)
2. 警示人們不忘過(guò)去
3. 旅游新景點(diǎn)
3. 其他建筑同樣反映中華文化(如故宮、頤和園等), 重建并非必需
4. 如部分恢復(fù), 可與廢墟對(duì)照, 讓人們記住歷史
4. 破壞該地生態(tài)環(huán)境
注意:詞數(shù):80左右。參考詞匯:故宮the Palace Museum 頤和園the Summer Palace Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題 謀篇布局
Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴 字字珠玉 (1)美詞:fall into ruins, original, reflect, comparison, reasonable, remind sb. of sth, advisable, promote (2)佳句① Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization.②Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district. Step 3:斟酌詞句 妙筆生花 要點(diǎn)1:支持重建的人認(rèn)為通過(guò)這么做, 我們可以看見(jiàn)花園的原始景觀;它反映了中國(guó)文明。一般表達(dá):Supporters of rebuilding the garden say that we can see the original sight of the garden, and it reflects the Chinese civilization. 句式升級(jí)(倒裝句, 定語(yǔ)從句)支持重建的人認(rèn)為只有通過(guò)這么做, 我們才可以看見(jiàn)花園的原始景觀, 它反映了中國(guó)文明。Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization. 要點(diǎn)2:如果我們重建它的一部分, 它就可以提供一種對(duì)照讓我們記住歷史。一般表達(dá):If we rebuild part of it, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history. 句式升級(jí)(過(guò)去分詞作狀語(yǔ))If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history. Step 4:銜接過(guò)渡 斐然成篇 Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860.Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not. Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization(文明). And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history. Those who disagree think it more reasonable to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never forget the history.Other buildings like the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessary to rebuild this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district. Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan, which will add beauty to the city. What’s more, the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local. 【仿寫(xiě)實(shí)踐】 以 “Protect Wild Animals” 為題, 寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求包括以下要點(diǎn), 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 使文章完整通順。要點(diǎn):1. 意義:野生動(dòng)物與人類的生活息息相關(guān);2. 現(xiàn)狀:野生動(dòng)物正在被過(guò)度捕殺;3. 后果:a. 生態(tài)平衡被破壞;b. 人類受到大自然的懲罰;4. 建議:a. 嚴(yán)懲盜獵者;b. 提高環(huán)保意識(shí); c. 建立自然保護(hù)區(qū)。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 Protect Wild Animals Wild animals are man’s close friends. They not only provide us with fun but also play a key role in keeping the balance of nature. Unfortunately, they are being over-hunted, and some species are dying out. If it goes on like this, man is to be punished. In order to stay away from the seemingly faraway disaster, man has to do something. First, effective laws must be passed to give the illegal hunters proper punishment. Second, we must set up nature reserves to provide the animals with comfortable habitats. Third, people’s awareness of environment protection should be raised to a higher level. 4 主題四 創(chuàng)新精神 【示例分析】 假定你是李華, 你校在學(xué)生中征集意見(jiàn), 詢問(wèn)學(xué)生是否贊成開(kāi)設(shè)iPad課堂(iPad classrooms)。你支持開(kāi)設(shè)iPad課堂。請(qǐng)給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封建議信, 要點(diǎn)如下:1. 資源豐富;2. 促進(jìn)交流;3. 利于環(huán)保;4. 其他理由。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。 Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題 謀篇布局
Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴 字字珠玉 (1)美詞:in favor of, to begin with, customize, tailor, for the sake of, take. . . into consideration (2)佳句① I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons.② To begin with, everyone learns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style. ③For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Step 3:斟酌詞句 妙筆生花 要點(diǎn)1:并且, 當(dāng)和網(wǎng)絡(luò)相連接的時(shí)候, 學(xué)生們可以和老師以及同學(xué)進(jìn)行互動(dòng), 討論如何更方便地學(xué)習(xí)。一般表達(dá):Moreover, when the students are connected to the Internet, they can interact with teachers and classmates and discuss how to learn more conveniently. 句式升級(jí)(過(guò)去分詞作狀語(yǔ), 賓語(yǔ)從句)并且, 當(dāng)和網(wǎng)絡(luò)相連接的時(shí)候, 學(xué)生們可以和老師以及同學(xué)就他們?nèi)绾慰梢愿奖愕貙W(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)行互動(dòng)。Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about how they learn more conveniently. 要點(diǎn)2:為了保護(hù)環(huán)境, 我們應(yīng)該開(kāi)設(shè)iPad課堂, 以減少用于造紙的樹(shù)木砍伐。一般表達(dá):To protect the environment, we should open iPad classrooms to reduce the trees cut down for paper. 句式升級(jí)(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ), 定語(yǔ)從句)為了保護(hù)環(huán)境, 開(kāi)設(shè)iPad課堂是一種很好的方式來(lái)拯救用于造紙而被砍伐的樹(shù)木。For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Step 4:銜接過(guò)渡 斐然成篇 Dear Headmaster,We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms. I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons. To begin with, everyone learns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailor it to different needs. Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about how they learn more conveniently. For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Most importantly, I believe students will develop their interests in the subjects by enjoying a new way of learning.I hope you would take my ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.Yours,Li Hua 【仿寫(xiě)實(shí)踐】 近些年來(lái), 隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及, 越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生的書(shū)寫(xiě)能力明顯退步了。為了改變這種局面, 保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)民族文化——漢字, 我校學(xué)生會(huì)提出以下倡議:1. 減少上網(wǎng)時(shí)間, 多讀書(shū);2. 記日記的好習(xí)慣, 練習(xí)書(shū)寫(xiě);3. 少用電子郵件, 盡量動(dòng)手給親朋好友寫(xiě)書(shū)信。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容, 代學(xué)生會(huì)寫(xiě)一封英文倡議書(shū)。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右, 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:普及:popularity 漢字:Chinese charactersDear friends,_____________________________________________________________ Let’s take action now!Students’ Union 【參考范文】 Dear friends,In recent years, many of us don’t write as well as we did in the past with the popularity of the Internet. In order to improve our handwriting and protect Chinese characters, we’d like to offer some suggestions:First, we should spend less time online and read more books. Besides, we’d better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practise handwriting. What’s more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails.Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us. So please pay more attention to our handwriting.Let’s take action now!Students’ Union
